Jhar Jhar pani Pariraheko thiyo
kahin katai thaun payena aja usle bas basna
sabai sadak hilaihilo thiyo
luga fato chhyatiyeko kehi thiyena odhna ochyaune.......

badal haru ko ghanghor pan bijuli ko karamat
tyo kalilo mutu yo pathar ko sahar
nanga khhuttaharu ra tyo kadedar sadak
uslai thaha chaina kahan lagdaichhan ti paila haru.....

hinda hinda jhismise ujyalo huncha
tara bas payena
aaba khapinasaknu huncha uslai
tyehi bto ma behosina pugcha tyo
sadak ma chhahal pahal huncha tara
u aachet bhaisakeko thiyo
kinaki
u nikai para pugisakeko thiyo dherai para...............................................

timro pani time ko barbad
hamro pani time ko barbad
bho kabita nalekha pani
bho kabita napadhu pani.

 dang , japhaliketo , is it that bad????? i guess that is one way of seeing it. Thanks for the comment .

Lukeko pratibha lai lukayerai rakhe huni.. Kabita Nepali ma, padhnu parne English ma...
You know what I am saying

 i know what u mean , yakthatlookslikecow, thanks 

here is my another try, thanks for reading .

के बिना अर्थ भाग्दैछु म ? ? ?
जीबन जीउन खोज्दैछु म
हजार गल्ती हरुलाई
सच्याउन खोज्दै छु म
बिशाल समुन्द्रमा मोती खोज्दै छु म
आफ्नो मायालाई आफ्नो बना उन खोज्दै छु म
के कुनै असम्भब कुरा माग्दै छु म ? ? ? ? ? ? ?