mcmxc Ji, excellent one! Very nice story; hope we get to read the next part soon. Thanks a lot for devoting your time to present such a wonderful story to readers..

kancha bro u came here without letting me know chill bro chill it's alrite ma man

mcmxc, excellent write up, I enjoyed reading each line. I am eager to read more.

kalejo, good to see you man. you must have had a wonderful holiday.. by the way, happy new year yaar

mcmxc, good one! can't wait for rest of the part.

"I namasted aunty and hurriedly left, without looking back. Such a tragedy. Dead are long gone and alive die with them everyday."

mcmxc, wow very nicely  presented the concoction of grief and sting. yes, can't wait to read the remaining part.

Thank you kancha01, Kalejo, wow-nepal and dipika02!!!

I appreciate your time to read the story. I agree I am not very adept at making interesting snippets and anecdotes for a more enjoyable read, but it is my first attempt in fiction. So, I am sure I can be excused for any errors, structural and conceptual.

I am still editing the 2nd half. Only that I have a problem, should I make it a happy ending as we would like to see it, or let it be, as it would have been. I would like your inputs to that.