this is a rough song, i am planning to finalize this song soon,

 

so i would like to request  you to give me some suggestions , so that i can make a proper changes in this song, and yeah please done hesiate to provide me the idea of different lyrics, coz i want to change the wordings in next recording,

 

 

S.S

not my type of music

It's too boring, repeative, no catch or hook, too 80's  and most of all, it sounds bad make out music.

Other than tat, it's not that bad in terms of your voice, mastering. Honestly.

My naive comment:

vocal is ok. not sure about lyrics, i have to listen once more.

music, its not clear, kinda dhas dhus..over computerized or something, not sure how to respond technically about tht.

keep it up!

music is ok for this type of maya prem lyrics.. but wana say.. just change maya preet bichod and blah blah.. the music eems ok.. but not peaky though.. vocal is ok..

peace

Not bad but may need more variations

tell me frankly, does your song start with C major
may be i am wrong

vocal fine.

music too coputerized.

9/10 good job